Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
When they finish school, teenagers face the dilemma of whether to get a job or continue their education. While there are some benefits to getting a job straight after school, I would argue that it is better to go to college or university.
2. (benefits of getting a job after school):
Topic sentence: The option to start work straight after school is attractive for several reasons.
(IDEAS/Reasons: start earning money, become independent, gain experience, learn skills, get promotions, settle down earlier, afford a house, have a family)
3. (benefits of higher education):
Topic sentence: On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial for students to continue their studies.
(IDEAS/Reasons: some jobs require academic qualifications, better job opportunities, higher salaries, the job market is very competitive, gain knowledge, become a useful member of society)
For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that students are more likely to be successful in their lives if they continue their studies beyond school level.